I always wonder how babies know to instinctively move their
bodies to the rhythm of music. I am also
surprised that as soon as a baby starts to dance we don’t immediately start criticizing
his footwork. We do not expect everyone
to become accomplished ballerinas or competition ballroom dancers. We are all expected to get up and respond to
the music, have fun and make fools of ourselves. Dancing is a way to show feelings, express
ourselves, however clumsily. So is
writing.
If writing is putting our thoughts into words and
transcribing them on a permanent surface to preserve, to share and to propagate,
then we all have as much right to write as to dance. We may not all become published authors and
go on book tours. But we all have a
right to scribe.
So who gets to be a writer? If you have a thought, you can
be a writer. If you have feelings and
opinions you are entitled to your own piece of paper and pencil. My job as the teacher of writers is to help
you learn the craft writing, just as a dance instructor does with dancers. I coach you in getting better at articulating
your thoughts and feelings in a way that moves others, convinces them or
informs them.
When I was eight years old, I started taking ballet classes. One day as I was chasseing across the floor,
my teacher admonished me to not bob my head like a pendulum. Needless to say I did not dance for long. When young writers come to me to show their
work and I find myself reacting first to the missing period, the lack of the
capital letter at the beginning of their sentence, the crooked f or the misspelled
words, I am afraid that they won’t write again either.
Katherine Bomer says:
“Learning language follows a
developmental course from ‘fluency’ to clarity to correctness. Writing begins in meaning making, and until
students feel ‘fluent’, that is comfortable, strong and at ease with putting
their thoughts on paper, they cannot work well on the quality of their own
writing; they cannot move toward ‘clarity’ (organization, logical sentence
flow) or ‘correctness’ (grammar and punctuation).”
As teachers and curriculum writers we have a choice: Spending the first few years of early
literacy helping our students find their voice, articulate their thoughts and
opinions and make a connection with their audiences or drilling conventions and
rules. The consequence of the first
choice may be young writers that will have something they will want to
say. They will attempt to publish their
work. They will type it into a word
processor that will tell them where their errors are and even help in
correcting them. The consequence of the
second choice is a stack of writing with perfect grammar and punctuation that
are graded, returned and promptly recycled because they are of no value to the
teacher or to the student himself.
When I read the confessions of today’s most accomplished
writers, I am even more convinced to just let them write! I am so glad that Gary Paulsen or Gabriel
García Márquez did not stop writing
because they were bad spellers, because the world would not be the same without
their stories and their words.
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